Info:
Your name: Mariia-chan
Age:15
Looks: Black, long hair, really nice body, big boobs(ha ha)
You're friends with matt, mello, near, and star(star is my character( just someone i wanted to add)
~Your POV~you were in your room drawing while a chacolate pocky was in your mouth.you were drawing a cat with kittens(i know random :x).when you were done you blew some eraser scaps off of it and examined your work.you smiled with approval,you closed you scetch book and grabbed an extra pocky box and put it in your pocket.you walked out the door then headed to the living room.
when you arrived you saw near on the floor with his puzzle.when you took a step you felt some thing under your foot."huh?"you picked it up,it was a puzzle piece.you were guessing it was nears so you went to go give it to him.when you made it to him he was already finished with his puzzle."hm wonder where the other piece went?"he was about to dump the while thing and start over again,before he he was going to do that, you placed the puzzle piece in it spot."looking for this?"you looked at him with a smile.he smiled back."yes,where did you find it?"you chuckled."when i came inside i stepped on it,thought it was yours so i came and brought it to you."near smiled again.he always smiled for you,it was a nice feeling.you opened a pocky box you had in your pocket and put one in your mouth."seen mello or matt around?"near shaked his head."no,but i think their out side with the other boys."you smiled."thanks near"you gave him a hug and went out side.when you went outside you took in a deep breath of air and let it out."ah i love it out side,so nice."you put another piece of pocky in your mouth.you started to walk around and enjoy the air.then with out waring a soccer ball came out of no where and smacked you over the head.(0.0)you fell to the ground."owie"you got up and rubbed your head.you saw mello,matt and some of the other boys running to you."Mariia-chan you okay?"mello got down and kneeled next to you,checking for damages."im okay,just lost some of my I.Q i think"you jocked.matt and some of the boys laughed."no seriously,are you okay?"mello had a worried face on him.you liked him alot,he was so nice to you."mello im fine,it was just a ball."you gave him a smile.and he smiled back."awww now dont you think that looks cute!"matt said while snickering.mello got red as a cherry and you just had a small pink blush."matt!"mello chased after him while you and the rest of the boys laughed.you got up and brushed yourself off,you felt the side of your head,there was a small bump.mello came back with an anime vein.you looked behind him and saw matt with bumps on his head.you giggled."ah,Mariia,mello,good to see you both here."roger came out with his hands behind his back."hello roger.""hey roger"you and mello greeted him."matt wat happen 2 U?"roger asked.you giggled and some of the boys did a small"pff" noise."errrr i rolled down a hill and hit a tree on the way down?"matt said with a sly grin.every one just started to laugh."hm im just going to have to believe that at the moment,but other than that may mariia and mello please step into my office?""sure"you both fallowed roger to his office."now the reason why i called you both here is because i got an assignment for the both of you"you gave a questioned look."you mean seperatly?"roger chuckled."no,together."you smiled,so did mello."wat do you need us 2 do?"mello asked."i need you to do a research for me on poisons." "poison? may i ask what for?"you said."just for judgement"roger smiled."judgement?"you and mello said at the same time."you have three days counting this one....so you better get to it."you both nodded and stepped out side of his office."okay....poisons...we can find the book about it in the library."you nodded."then shall we go then?"mello smirked."ladies first"you giggled and started to walk to the library.You and mello stepped into the library only seeing afew kids reading and and studying."okay we shoul-""Mello!Mariia-chan!~"Star skipped next to you and gave you a hug."wat R U both doing here?"you smiled,and heard mello growl.he didnt like her very much."were here to do a research for roger."mello grabbed your hand."and we only got three days so bug off."he pulled you were the "p" section is at in the book cases."meanie!"you heard her say while stomping away.you giggled.you noticed mellos hand was still on yours.you blushed but didnt pull away."lets see,poisons..poison...poisons......AH! there it is!"it was on the almost highest part of the book case."ill get it!"you let go of mellos hand and started to climb the book case."oi!Mariia be careful!"mello yelled while blushing,he just forgot that he was holding your hand and plus*ahem*he could see up your skirt.(TeeHeexD)you made it and grabbed the book."got ya-aahhhhh!!!"when you grabed it you fell off the book case."Mariia!"mello yelled,he quickly ran to catch you.your eyes were closed shut.when you landed you didnt feel the ground,you just felt some thing warm.when you open your eyes your face was inches from mellos.you were looking into his blue eyes and he was looking back at yours.you closed your eyes and leaned in closer,he did the same.when your soft cherry blossom lips brushed against his,it felt like you were flaoting.mello was still holing you so you put your arms around his neck to make it deeper,more passionate.mello hugged U closer 2 him.when you both were done U looked at each others eyes.U finally snapped out of it and had a huge blush on your face,mello had one too but not as big,he smirked."w-wa-we sho-should get going and do this research."mello put you down with a smirk still on his face."sure."he went to go pick up the book that was on the ground."Wats Going On Here!!"the librarian came with a angry face."were sorry ma'am i just tried to get a book and fell down."you said with your inoccent face.the librarians face changed."well i hope you werent hurt,next time ask me to get U a book.""Yes Ma'am i will."you said with a smile.the librarian smiled back and walked back to her desk."haha you know how to charm a person without knowing it."mello said with a smile."i can charm?" you asked with a questioned face. mello chuckled."yeah you can."he gave you a peck on the cheek,and you blushed.you both went to a table and sat at it."well now lets get started."you said opening the book."Right."mello skooted next to you and started to read the book.you yawned and rubbed your eyes."tired?"mello asked."naw just rubbing my eyes."mello smirked."U dont have 2 lie,we could continue this tomarrow,were almost finished.""Kay,but let me put something in first."you grabed the paper you were writing the reseach in and wrote down something."let me see."mello grabbed the paper from you."many poisons are slow and painful,but yet some might also cause addiction or have a.....good..feeling...to...it........." he said the last 4 words in pauses."something wrong?"you gave him a worried look."we could take it out if you do-""NO!i mean...no its fine just thinking thats all."he smirked and put the paper inside the book."okay...if you say so..."you gave the book to the librarian so she could hold it for you."ah its already night"you grabed a box of pocky,opened it,and put one in your mouth.you put it down and started to change into your Pj's.you had your shirt off and was going to take off your bra.(heehee bra:3)at the same time you slid your bra down your arms you heard the door close.you turned around and turned super cherry red,there stood mello himself.
~LEMON!!!XD~
"AH!MEH-MEH-MELLO!WHAT ARE YOU DOING HERE!?AND HAVE U EVER HEARD OF KNOCKING!?"you coverd your breasts and turned around."i was going to ask you if you wanted to go out for a little walk....but seeing U like this....makes me want to have other plans."He smirked and started to walk closer."PLANS!?WAT KIND OF PLANS!?"U stared to back up until your back hit the wall."heh U will find out."he placed both of his hands to your side.when you were about to speak he placed his lips over yours.U tried to push him off,but it didnt work so you started to kiss back."mmph"you felt his tongue lick your lips for an enertance.you hesitate to open your mouth,once it was open you felt his tongue slither in your mouth.it touched every part inside your mouth.you started to moan,mello smirked and started to feel your hour glass framed body.you shivered to his cold hands.when you 2 parted it left behind a trail of saliva(*drools*).he started to go down your neck,nipping and sucking,trying to find a weak spot.when he found it you moaned "OOuuMm!",he smirked and started to suck and nip at that spot.while his lips were busy,his hands roamed around your body.he took your hands off of your breasts and started to squeeze them.you moaned more "MMmmm AHHAH!!".when he was done with your neck he went down to your collor bone then to your breasts.his mouth went over the left boob while he rolled your right nipple in between hin fingers."Ah!mello pl-please do-dont do that!"you moaned more,you felt yourself getting wet.mello smirked again and bit your nipple while he pinched the other.you were moaning like crazy.when it was hard he switched and did the same routine to the other breast.you were breathing hard with short breathes.when he was done he picked you up and placed you on the bed.he started to french kiss you while his hand went under your skirt.he rubbed your clit feeling its wetness(lol lemon slang:3).you moaned under his touch "oOOO MELLO!!".when he broke the kiss he smirked."hm?your so wet,such a naughty girl."he smirked and licked your neck,went to your right ear and blew in it,then niped on it."no ah you-your wrong im no-not AH!"you didnt get to finish because he stuck a finger inside you.he smirked again and started to pump his finger in and out."ah!mello!your driving me crazy!"he stated to suck on your left niple,he put in another finger and started to pump it in and out."mello im going to cum!""hm really?well we cant have that yet."he pulled his fingers out and licked your pre cum."i cant let you get all the fun."he pulled your skirt down with your underwear.he niped your ear.you flinched."i want you to undress me."you blushed and nodded,he smirked."good."you licked his neck before you took off his shirt.when his shirt was off you gave him a peck on the lips then down his neck.he groaned when U found his spot,so you started to suck and nip at that spot while your hands were feeling his chest.when you were done u left a hickey there that might last for a week or so.you stated to kiss down his chest,stomach,then his pants line.you gulped and pulled his pants down with his boxers.you got extremly red when you saw his hard member."uum...thats huge!"you thought.mello smirked."like what you see?"before you could answer he pulled you closer to him.he sat you on his stomach and started to french you.his tongue massaged yours,he wraped one arm around your neck to make the kiss deeper.you moaned in his mouth,when you both separated saliva ran down your mouth,mello licked it off.(Gosh this is killing me!>.< ;;)he fliped you over and started to kiss your neck down to your stomach,he stuck 2 fingers in his mouth then started to rub your clit with them.you started to moan and spreaded your legs wider for him.(woo work it girl!!xD)he smirked and stuck both of his fingers inside you,then started to move them around and pump them in and out."mel-me-mello!im going to ah! cum!""eh already?then lets kick it up a knoch."he took out is fingers and stuck it in your mouth.you started to lick and suck at his fingers,tasting your pre cum.he lowered his head and licked around and around your clit just to tease you."do-dont tease me..."you said in short breathes.mello started to lick your clit then inside of it."AH!YES RIGHT THERE MELLO AHH!IT FEELS SO GOOD!(cant stop laughingxD)"mello started to eat you out,you felt his tongue hit your walls."i cant hold it in..."you thought."mello im going to ahh!-"you came in his mouth.the cum went inside his mouth and when he lifted his head some were dripping from his mouth.you kissed him and licked it,you fliped him over and kissed down to where his hard member was at.(me:*cough*Cough*^\\\^)you wraped your hands around it and started to pump it.mello started to moan,whitch caused you to put him in your mouth."AH!Mariia-chan!"he grabed a handful of your hair and pushed your head down.you gaged but continue to move your head up and down while your tongue was swirling around his member."AH!Mariia!im cumming!"he pushed your head down and cumed into your mouth.you swallowed his cum."salty yet sweet"you thought.mello fliped you over and got in position."you ready mariia?"you nodded and closed your eyes,mello pushed into you and you screamed out in pain,mello covered your mouth with his.he stayed like that so U can ge used to his size.when you finaly felt the pleasure,you wraped your legs around his waist and wraped your arms around his neck.mello took that as a signal to go.slowly he started to pump in and out,then he started to go faster and faster.each time he slamed into you,you let out a moan."Ah yes mello!faster!faster!deeper!"he did wat you said and started to pump faster."tch im going to cum!crap!"mello thought,he soon went deeper and found your spot."ah yes there!mello im going to cum!""me too mariia!"he stared to pump faster."Miheel!!!""Mariia-chan!!!!"after you both screamed each others name in pure bliss.he spilled his seeds inside you."ah"mello pulled out while breathing hard."its all sticky"you looked down and saw some cum oozing out of your clit."sorry"he gave you a kiss and layed next to you."mello?""hn?""i love you"mello smiled."i love you to mariia-chan."he gave you a kiss and snuggled under the covers,with his head on top of yours."your my poison..."was all you said before drifting off to slumber land.
AWWW!!XD <<33
Saturday, August 1, 2009
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cool loved it!
ReplyDeleteLOVED IT
ReplyDeletethis story isnt yours.
ReplyDeletejust changing the characters and names doesn't mean you wrote this story!
its a shame how people cant be original so they go and take other peoples stories, change it up a lil hoping no one would notice and just BAM put it out in public and claim they wrote it.
it is not right.
ORIGINAL STORY GOES TO ColorfulBunny on Quizilla
which happens to be oh i dunno
ME.
delete this.
Just cause its like your doesn't make it your story. just let this person (sorry dont know your name) keep it up cause I know a lot of people who like if
ReplyDeleteRainbowBits, correct me if im wrong but i dont see anything here that claims it as this persons. maybe you just want to claim it as YOU'RE own because you like the story, i dont know but, if the writer copyed it, it could mean that they admire whoever wrote it and want more people to see it or wanted to shine some more light on it. (death note pun intened)
ReplyDeleteI'm sorry to sound so negative,but this story basically sucked. Your spelling was atrocious,and almost nothing was capitalized properly. Your random comments were distracting me from the story and your grammar needs work. I hate the fact that you used 2 instead of the word and that your sentences weren't capitalized. You also neglected to capitalize names for the most part and there weren't any spaces between the end quotation marks and the following sentence. It's like you didn't even try to write a good story. I don't know why you thought publishing this was a good idea,but it wasn't.
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